Hello fellow group members. As of now I have not changed any of my quotes or commentary so you won't have to worry about repetition. Do you guys think I need to add anything else? Once you post your comments I will critique them for you.
I think your paragraph is going great! All I can really think of is that you had one word that you repeated about 4 times in a "chunk", but besides that keep up the good work!
I think your paragraph is going great! All I can really think of is that you had one word that you repeated about 4 times in a "chunk", but besides that keep up the good work!
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